Air Beam Advert – Second Edit

I revised the text again, spacing it closer together and closer to the central point, and even adding a little beam based on my tutor’s advice, as well as a slightly different view when the beam fires out of the ground, inspired by the Pyrats cinematography. It never occured to me before but the idea was so simple.

I didn’t want to just have a plain mountain landscape, so I threw in a cow with a bit of movement to liven the scene up. The beam itself looked a little boring so I added some accents, swirls and the like as it comes out to give it a bit more life. It’s a little longer as a result but I feel it’s got a more smoother and professional finish

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Air Beam Advert – Second Edit

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